To this day I cannot forget
The tears were making my cheeks wet.
I couldn’t stop crying,
My little brother was dying.
I didn’t know what to do.
What would you do if it was you?
I felt like I was going to die,
Sometimes I still think of him and cry.
Oscar
11 comments:
DUDE.. this poem was great! I like how you showed sad emotion in it. you expressed how you really feel and i think thats really cool.
Nick P (1)
sounds like a very touchy subject. this is a good subject and i can relate to it...
Kelsee
OH MY GOSH OSCAR! wow that's so so so sad! If this isn't just a poem you made up I am so sorry. Great poem though!
-Kesha :)
You need to step it up if you don't get locked up man. I hope you don't you are a good kid and can do a lot in life.
Mark
Emotion gives poems so much more meaning. I guess suffering is necessary for good art. Keep writing.
Nick B.
I'm sorry about what you wrote. I have lost some one who was dear to me. I know that it's not easy to just lift your head back up and wipe your tears. Because they just keep falling.
-shalee l.
bad butt ese i liked it i knew there was a soft spot in you jaja thats great though
This poem was insane. I really like the emotion in it.
Dani
That Is a really good poem. I think that its good because i had a friend die and I cried a lot.
Tayler
thats a good poem i did'nt think gangsters cryed
Simple poems can be the most meaningful. Find real feelings and keep writing about them.
Nick B.
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