Friday, March 27, 2009

Narrative Introduction

A man in all white held me by my arm. All eyes on me as I was pressed into a large pool of water. I was pulled out and I looked out to the eyes and saw the joy and how proud my mom was. I would forever hold this close to my heart. It was amazing all the bad things I have done in my life I was forgiven for. This long journey I have been on was one step closer. I had an indescribable warm good feeling with me. This will last and guide me through my life. I had waited and worked blood sweat and tears to achieve this and I did it.

Grant

3 comments:

kirk said...

dude i remember getting dunked it was pretty scary my brother told me i was going to drowned cause i made my dad mad before it all went down. so my brother was like your going to die,so i ran to my mom and what i didn't know was she was part of the joke. so i ran up to her crying and told her dad was going to drown me and she was like i told him too. so i ran and hid in the chapel crying. kirk

Anonymous said...

hey man i get what your saying when you get feeling inside that your parents are proud of you or that they love you it feels good, well thats cool that you feel that way.

Landon

Anonymous said...

thats a really good story grant
billy