“Get all the kids in the car and wait for me hurry” my mom was yelling. “Bre you don’t have to go” my dad was pleading. I was 10. It was the day before fathers day and my little brothers birthday. This was the day my father passed away. We got home to him acting all weird. I knew something was wrong at the moment I walked in. My mom was yelling at him telling him she hated him and he was trying to leave a message for my aunt. My mom told him we would be better off if I just died.
Breaunna
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you did a good job. i think its going to be a good paper when you get done with it.
-joshua
Wow, that was powerful. I wonder what happens next. This is a great example of an intro.
Nick B.
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