Friday, March 20, 2009

A ten line poem
As I sit here in a great struggle. Trying to save something dear A grade, a future, a life.
It is hard to admit that one poem
Can mean so much to me.
Yet knowing I will make it
I will succeed. I will force myself
To do my up most to go the mile I can succeed,
I will succeed And when you find this grade
You will find
that my grade my future my life Lies in your hands.



13 words
How are you? This class is
Competitive like a pack of apes fighting to
Become the “alpha male”
The only words of advice I have for these
People are simple 13 words
Boys know how to fight
And only men know how
To walk away. so remember my children
The day you can learn that you are smarter
Then a monkey is the day this class becomes a little less
… callas
I hope that some day this class will be a class full of men because
More and more every day our old teacher becomes a little more like a parent
Baby sitting a 3 year old.



Kevin

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Holly cow I really like your poems! I ecspessialy think that the second one is true. About the teacher being a parent to 3 year olds. Totally true! Grow up guys haha.

-Kesha :)

Anonymous said...

Those poems were really good. I like the metaphors that you used. Keep writing, your good at it.
Karissa