LOVE AND HATE
Love like a dove that’s flying above
Hate like fate it’s a rate of the heart
Your heart wants to take a shove
It will hurt until you find your counterpart
Love is also a turtledove
Hate can also be a work of art
That’s why people look for love
Just like hate is fate of the heart
It can be a dove
Or it can be fate
By TY
THE HOUSE
The house will run from the people
It also dropped its steeple
The people tried to catch the house
The main one that tried was the lady in the blouse
The house feels hurt
So it’s on an alert
The lady still tries
While the house cries
By TY
5 comments:
i think you hate after you loved
The first poem is amazing.. it's almost exactly how I feel about LOVE. I don't necessarily agree with the comment that said I thikn you hate after you've loved. Only because there's a lot of times that you still love, even if you want to hate that person. Good job!
~Rachel
I really liked the first one. I think hate and love are two things in life people strive for. We would like to think hate isn't a part of that but we are. We love and hate. Good poems.
-Kesha :)
Those are really good comparisons. Your really smart, and your a good writer.
Karissa
I like these poems. My favorite was the first one because I can agree with you on the feeling of the love.
Dani
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