Anger is red, It sounds like death on the streets, It tastes like blood dripping from a dead body, It smells like manure on a village farm, Anger feels like a funeral as a child just lay’s there.
Dani
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I like the last sentence you wrote. It puts a lot more weight on the subject and shows what it seems like.
I enjoyed this poem a lot. It is kind of like the way anger is to me. I agree what anthony said about the last line because it also tells you maybe what caused your anger.
That sad to read because somewhere in the world this is or already happened . I like this a lot and the feels behind it are strong. I hope life is going well and you are happy and smiling.
I'm speechless really. I though you put SO much power in this! Everything you said was so powerful! Especially the last line. As soon as i read it my heart dropped. Wow.
6 comments:
I like the last sentence you wrote. It puts a lot more weight on the subject and shows what it seems like.
Anthony
I enjoyed this poem a lot. It is kind of like the way anger is to me. I agree what anthony said about the last line because it also tells you maybe what caused your anger.
- Aubrianna (1)
That sad to read because somewhere in the world this is or already happened . I like this a lot and the feels behind it are strong. I hope life is going well and you are happy and smiling.
Mark
I'm speechless really. I though you put SO much power in this! Everything you said was so powerful! Especially the last line. As soon as i read it my heart dropped. Wow.
-Kesha :)
once agian this is a good poem and i can tell that you put alot of feeling behind it and you took some time writing it
I like how you explained anger with colors and words. My favorite line was Anger is Red.
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