Friday, February 27, 2009

On Wednesday I got to go to the play Romeo and Juliet. It was the first Shakespeare play that I have been too, so it was kind of confusing. Throughout the play I had to ask people what they were talking about and what was happening. My favorite character was Mercutio because he brought comedy to a tragedy. I was sad that he had to die so soon because he was hilarious.

Tonight I am going to the MC Hammer and Vanilla Ice concert. I’m excited
Even, though I didn’t ever listen too them, a lot of old people did and I get to see them dancing at the concert. Going to the concert is the only thing that I’m doing tonight and then tomorrow I have to work. It’s not going to be an exciting weekend, but I will still have fun.

Karissa
Jealousy
It is strange how jealousy works. Even though you don’t really think your jealous it’s there in the back of your head. Now I’m not jealous of anything right at this moment I am sure! But after seeing someone in my last class almost explode on another girl it kind of made me ask why we get jealous… how do we over come jealousy? It’s in every human always there but yet it is hard to detect. The only way I have found it to have someone tell you. Like a sister, brother, a close friend, or any one extremely close to you who knows you like the back of their hand. I will admit though that it isn’t hard to tell if your jealous all you have to do is admit that you are. And that is the first step to getting yourself off the thought. This is an odd subject but I do believe jealousy is a large part of drama so that is why I decided to write about this.

Kevin
Freedom is very important to some people. I wish I could have the freedom that other people have especially now that I’m stuck in states care. The freedom that I would like to have is to be able to walk down the road with a girl who I could be dating and be able to hold her hand without people looking at me weird because I feel like I have to hide things from other people and that isn’t right. Homosexual people are the most that have to hide things from people.

Freedom comes in many ways and one of the biggest is the freedom of speech one because no one follows that rule. That is one of our Amendments and the only person that can really talk freely is our president. It would be nice to have freedom to listen to non-edited music too because that’s all I hear now days is the bleeps in my favorite songs.

See when you are in the states care you really get your rights taken away and now I can’t even talk about people I like that are in the same program with me because I’m scared to get into trouble.

So, when Matt has us write on freedom I didn’t really think about anything and now that I have to rewrite it I have to edit some things out due to freedom of writing and speech. So, now do you see my point?

Dani
FREEDOM
Freedom to me is having the ability to go and do what you want to do because you want to do it not just because you have to do it. Most of the people in this school don’t get to do. What they want to do because their in the system and I don’t think that’s very fair. But its our fault that we have to be on a leesh and do what everyone else wants to do. I don’t think its fair that every one gets in trouble for the things that they really want to do because on Tuesday I went to the mall to hang out and got put on house arrest. And apparently they can tell your case manager you were on drugs and you werent. And then when they test you and you come up negative they still think your on drugs so if you get the opprotunity to get out of states custody take it don’t stop and think about it just do it. So if you think your free your not free because anyone can say their free when their not so you might want to stop and think about the place your in and then decide whether your freedom is worth what you doing.


Ben
I have a new caseworker and I’m very happy about it. My last caseworker didn’t really care. He would never call and if he did it was for one out of two reasons. One, he was getting yelled at by my judge for not checking up on me, or because he forgot I had to sign a paper for him. I asked him to get me a bus pass so I could get back and forth from therapy and it took him literally four months to get it to me.

On a positive note my new caseworker seems cool as hello! He wants to have a meet with me and my family so we’re on the same page. Another cool thing about him is he seems to not like my proctor parents at all. So I’m hoping that I’ll get moved or be able to do something different along those lines.

I’m happy for a couple reasons but this one is the best that’s why I wrote about it.
Love Peace and have a Good Day.
Boyd
I think that freedom now is just a word for me because no matter where I am there are always going to be rules against what rights I am supposed to have as an American citizen. And I think that even though I am not locked up in d.t. or jail I still am not free because I can’t do whatever I want to do. Even though I am 18 years old that is just another number all that that means is I now will get tried as an adult and no longer as a juvenile the charges now will be taken more seriously. And I still have to answer to some one and have to ask to go places. I am no free but I am not locked up I am in between I don’t think I will ever be truly free until I am living on my own. Even then I still will have to follow other peoples rules they have set for America


By angelo
Hamlets indecision is evident throughout the play. Give examples and explain how his indecisions effects his actions and the plot of the play.


Hamlet has lots of problems throughout the play because he dose not think before he acts. For example, after Hamlet dose not kill Claudius in the church he goes up to his mother’s room and starts to talk to her. Polonius was hiding behind the drapes without Hamlet knowing about him being there. When Polonius starts to yell out help Hamlet with out thinking starts to stab the drapes thinking that it was Claudius. After he finds out that it was now not who he thought it was his indecision acting makes Laertes go to Denmark from France to get revenge on who ever killed his father even though Hamlet did not kill him on perpous.

This starts a chain of events leading to Ophelia killing her self because she is confused, Gertrude being poisoned and Claudius killing himself due to pressure of other people telling him to drink the poison that killed Gertrude.

If Hamlet thought about what he was going to do more then I think maybe not as many people would have had to die.

Hamlet has indecision problems when he talks to Ophelia also. She can’t tell if Hamlet really loves her of not. She felt used by Hamlet when he took her in the bedroom. I don’t think that Hamlet was really using her I think that she just thought that because Hamlet was acting strange after his fathers dies and cause she dose not understand that Hamlet did not mean to kill her father.

This play is about communication problems. If people in the play talk about there problems to each other it would of helped hamlet not go crazy, it would of helped Ophelia understand what was going on with Hamlet why what happened to her farther did happen to him, and if Polonius didn’t spy on Hamlet instead of just talking to him he problem would not of died.

Laertes should have found out why Hamlet killed his farther by talking to Hamlet instead of just wanting revenge. Then maybe he would not of tried to kill Hamlet and in turn not die him self. Laertes is the only one that Finley understands everything before he dies. He asks for forgiveness from Hamlet cause he understands why Hamlet did what he did. He realizes that everything is the result of Claudius being selfish and killing King Hamlet.

Colton

Friday, February 20, 2009

Hamlet & Laertes

They both have love for the same women, for laertes its his sister, and for hamlet it’s his girlfriend Ophelia. They both want to see her with a happy life and not with the wrong people, laertes doesn’t want her to marry hamlet because he’s starting to go crazy, hamlet doesn’t want her to be with her brother because he’s going to make her break up with him and then she wouldn’t be happy and neither of them want that.

They both are very honorable toward their family, friends, and in their work. They would rather die than have their families be mad at them. They have the most respect for their countries and would do anything to help protect it

They also hate each other and cannot stand to be around each other. They also want to get revenge for their fathers deaths and are very determined to do so and will go to great lengths, like hamlet got two of his friends killed so he could come back and kill his uncle.

And in the end they were both crazy for revenge they both ended up dieing while fencing with poison on the rapier (sword) and his mom, and uncle died.

Ben
HAMLET

The moral of the story in my opinion is that revenge gets you no where it only ends up with every one around you getting hurt. Even though it looked like revenge was the only way for hamlet. I mean after he murdered the king he tried to kill hamlet after he found out his father. Shakespeare was pretty smart in making this story. I understand now why matt decided to have us read Shakespeare.

I wish I could have been there to see the real Shakespeare’s plays I met this girl she loves Shakespeare after I told a poem to her that I memorized off of Dougs dead poets society she gave me one of the best complements. She said “ at least one of Travis’s friends are civilized“ the girls name is Robyn. She is currently dating my friend Travis.

The ending was one of the most suspenseful plays I have ever herd before I need to see the play in real time the acting would have to be great though

By Kevin
I believe that the moral for Hamlet is revenge gets you nowhere. My supporting subjects is Hamlet spent most of his time thinking about how he will get his revenge and it ended up taking his life. He also ended up getting people mad at him mostly the king. That just made the king want him to be killed and he also gets blamed for a death.

Hamlet gets killed for trying to get revenge for his father. So he wants to kill his uncle because he killed his father but he thinks too much about it when he could’ve done what Fortenbras did. I think he should have thought twice about because than he might have just decided to let him live.

Laertes also wanted to kill Hamlet because he blamed him for his sister’s death. Also he was responsible for his fathers death because Hamlet killed Laertes father because he just went and attacked the person behind the curtain because he thought it was the king.

TY
The question I decided to answer was “Compare and Contrast any of the following pair: Hamlet and Laertes, Gertrude and Ophelia, and Claudia and Polonius.” I decided to write on Hamlet and Laertes because they had a main part in the play. In this paragraph I am going to talk about the similar things that they had in common in the play. Hamlet and Laertes were both princes, but in different countries. They also wanted revenge for their father’s death.

Next, I will be talking about how Hamlet is different from Laertes. Hamlet was madly in love with Ophelia, which is Laertes’s sister. Hamlet also saw his father’s ghost. Another thing was he was very smart and knew how to get out of trouble. Hamlet was quiet about his plans when it came to how he was going to get revenge.

The last thing I’ll talk about is how Laertes is different than Hamlet. Laertes was very upfront with how he was going to get revenge on Hamlet. He also felt remorse when he was dying at the end because he relized why Hamlet was getting revenge. Laertes was a man who blamed others for his sister’s death. He didn’t approve of Ophelia and Hamlet being together, and he stuck his nose in other people’s business.

Dani
Hamlets indecision is evident throughout the play. Give examples and explain how his indecisions effects his actions and the plot of the play.


Hamlet has lots of problems throughout the play because he dose not think before he acts. For example, after Hamlet dose not kill Claudius in the church he goes up to his mother’s room and starts to talk to her. Polonius was hiding behind the drapes without Hamlet knowing about him being there. When Polonius starts to yell out help Hamlet with out thinking starts to stab the drapes thinking that it was Claudius. After he finds out that it was now not who he thought it was his indecision acting makes Laertes go to Denmark from France to get revenge on who ever killed his father even though Hamlet did not kill him on perpous.

This starts a chain of events leading to Ophelia killing her self because she is confused, Gertrude being poisoned and Claudius killing himself due to pressure of other people telling him to drink the poison that killed Gertrude.

If Hamlet thought about what he was going to do more then I think maybe not as many people would have had to die.

Hamlet has indecision problems when he talks to Ophelia also. She can’t tell if Hamlet really loves her of not. She felt used by Hamlet when he took her in the bedroom. I don’t think that Hamlet was really using her I think that she just thought that because Hamlet was acting strange after his fathers dies and cause she dose not understand that Hamlet did not mean to kill her father.

This play is about communication problems. If people in the play talk about there problems to each other it would of helped hamlet not go crazy, it would of helped Ophelia understand what was going on with Hamlet why what happened to her farther did happen to him, and if Polonius didn’t spy on Hamlet instead of just talking to him he problem would not of died.

Laertes should have found out why Hamlet killed his farther by talking to Hamlet instead of just wanting revenge. Then maybe he would not of tried to kill Hamlet and in turn not die him self. Laertes is the only one that Finley understands everything before he dies. He asks for forgiveness from Hamlet cause he understands why Hamlet did what he did. He realizes that everything is the result of Claudius being selfish and killing King Hamlet.

Colton
This weekend should be pretty cool it’s my proctor mom’s birthday so we are going to go out to dinner. Next week is my 18th birthday I am way excited because I go to court the day before my birthday, and I might get released. I really hope that I get released on Thursday that way I can live one my own. If I get released then I am going to move into a house in Eagle Mountain, and I am going to be staying here to finish high school. After I graduate in March then I am going to just be working and going to collage at UVU. I want to go out into the social work field and become a case manager or a therapist or something like that. I am really looking forward to getting in collage and having a fun time going to collage.

Stephen
I think the message of Hamlet is revenge and judgment. All of Hamlet’s time was focused on revenging his father’s death, which only led to his own death. He was depressed and in the wrong state of mind to make any rational decisions. When Hamlet was supposed to be focused on Ophelia all he could worry about was getting Claudius back for killing his father. If he had been more concerned about the things that were important at the time, he wouldn’t have lost all the people that he cared about.

When someone is betrayed by another person revenge sounds really sweet. Most people when their emotions are taking over their actions don’t make the right decisions. A person needs some time to think through and evaluate the outcome of the actions they want to take. Most of them don’t take the action that they were thinking about at the time the person betrayed them. The people that choose to take immediate action are the ones that are sitting in prison regretting what they did.

The comparison of Hamlet and everyday people is that everyone has the urge for revenge. Hamlet went psycho and took action to his temptation. If you let emotions overwhelmed you, you can loose everyone that is close to you. Hamlet’s love of his life, mother and best friends all died. Hamlet’s actions led him into his personal hell. I think that this tragedy is a lesson for everyone, don’t let you emotions take over you life. Just because you feel something and one point doesn’t mean that you are going to feel that way later. You don’t want your actions to be negative and ruin your life.

Karissa

Friday, February 13, 2009

HAPPY VALENTINES DAY

Well my days been going good. A lot better than my other v-day. Like one v-day I brought a girl some flowers and some other things that you gives your girl for v-day. Well I gave her the stuff I got her, maybe two periods later she told me that she was playing me with this dude in high school. I wasn’t very happy about that so I told her to leave me alone and get out of my face. She told me that she really cared about me and didn’t want us to brake up than she stated crying. I told her to go @#&^*!, ^#*&(#*&$, #(&^!%$ her self, and walked away.

After that v-day I really didn’t like the holiday. I have had a couple more bad v-days but I really don’t want to talk about them.

This is one of the better v-days I’ve had in a while. I hope that they stay this good.

Boyd
So, Valentine’s Day is coming up, and I dislike Valentine’s Day a lot. Well it’s ok. I have gotten dumped on Valentine’s Day a few times and I’m always alone, which now doesn’t really bother me because I’m used to being alone. I like the holiday because it’s the Day of Love, but because of my poor choices I can’t hang out with the girl that I really like.

I have some traditions of Valentine’s Day, my mom and I used to go out to eat to cheer me up because all my girlfriends just left me. Sometimes my mom and I would go to the store and buy the ingredients to make brownies. Then, we would go home and make the brownies and put it in a heart shaped pan.

My plans this year is I’m stuck home, so I will be hanging out with my foster mom’s mom again for the third weekend in a row. I will probably end up just watching T.V. and making food. I might see if I can do something, but I doubt that I can. This weekend is going to suck! So, that is what my Valentine’s Day looks like this year.

-Dani Hatfield
My valentines days in the past have all sucked because there was not real love in any of them they were more about drugs and gangs there was never nothing like I have now with shalee and our relationship that we have now. Because we actually have true love for each other there is more to shalee and me than just sex we have a lot in common we communicate real good we share a lot of the same values. I can now finally say I am truly in love with her and I don’t care what people say because they don’t mean any thing. I think this valentines day will be the best one I have ever had just because I have shalee in my life

By angelo
Valentines Day is tomorrow, and even though I don’t have a boyfriend I am still excited. I am just planning on going out to dinner and maybe to a movie or something. There is always something to do on a Saturday night. My mom is really big into holidays so she always gets me the most random stuff just for fun. I have always thought that buying gifts for someone on Valentines Day was hard, but my mom doesn’t really care. I loved elementary school when everyone would make their own boxes, and then you spend the whole day giving out candy and cards. It would be cool if high school did something like that. Even though we still do fun stuff, we still work, and we don’t have parties or anything like that. I guess when you grow up life just gets less exciting. Anyways Happy Valentines Day everyone!!!!!

Karissa
My Essay About Safe Sex Ed.

I think if we were to have actual sex ed the rates of teen pregnancy and STD’s would go down significantly. The things that sex ed should cover are, knowing how to be safe, know were and how to get protection, why people should use protection, STD’s, why they should get tested, and teach the results of their actions.

We should teach protection to well be safe. Part of the reason I think STD’s are out of control because people don’t know the chances of getting STD’s or they don’t care. The youth that are experimenting and don’t know about berth control or that is no law that says you have to be a certain age to get condoms. If we were to teach about contraceptives in class that would help a lot with the teen pregnancy and STD’s.

Another thing we need to teach is that the results to their actions can really be life changing, and if they have certain viral diseases you can die. Well I guess that’s pretty life changing isn’t it. People think that if you use a condom you don’t have to worry about STD’s but you can still give your partner a STD’s even touching their skin. We need to stress on STD’s how they are transmited, and how they change peoples lives.

We need to teach that STD’s are dangerous and don’t just affect you. STD’s affect your partner, your loved ones, and even your own children. A lot of STD’s can be given to the featis if the mother has an STD. Now do you know that?

If people know only half of what could be tought and its not doing any good I think that we should teach everything that can teach. For the people that don’t agree with me I have one question for you. Would you rather have your children expiriment because their friends are…. Or expiriment with the nolage to be safe. You chose.

Boyd

Friday, February 6, 2009

The school bored is planning on changing the rule on cell phones in classes. I believe that they should be aloud in school.
Here are some of the reasons I believe that.

Teachers have them, so why not us students? I think its just fair.
It’s not fair because teachers can pull out a cell phone and the students can’t. The teachers use them the same as kids. Like some teachers take calls and text in class.

I also think that we need them for in case of emergency. What if your case manager needs to ask you something important and they don’t have your school number. It’s easier for them to leave you a message or text. That kind of thing.

What if someone in your family gets hurt or what if you feel very sick? Like what if your mom has to go to the doctor and has to tell you that she wont be at home? What if you get hurt and you need to call the ambulance? We need cell phone so we know that stuff.

Most phones have useful tools like a calculator, a calendar, and stuff like that. It also can help the students do better in school because of the ability to use the cell phone.

I have discussed the reasons that we need cell phones. I know there are bad things that go with it. However I also think the good out weigh the bad so I ask you to please allow cell phones

Ty
I am in favor of having music in class. I have several reasons for it and I will give a few.


First of all, I’m in favor of having music in class because it helps me and others to focus. For me it can be a lot easier to focus on my work if I am listening to music that I like. It somehow takes away all the other distractions that there is in a classroom. Music to me is just a way to be able to get away from distracting things and focus on certain matters.


Second, music is a way to relax. Most people listen to music and kick back. Slow music like oldies for example help me relax. It also helps me get away from all of my problems for a while and also to avoid getting into more trouble. I know it’s not like this just for me, I’m pretty sure that there is others that also do the same thing I do.

My third reason is that it also gives you something to do when you finish up an assignment early and you have nothing else to do. It would at least keep you busy. It would make it a lot easier for the teachers because they wouldn’t have to tell you what to do.

In other words we should have music because if you think about it, it works out good for everyone. Teachers don’t have to tell you what to do. You can focus and relax and it also gives you something to do when you finish things early.

Oscar
Q: should boy’s and girls in schools be separated?
A and reason:

I disagree with what they are saying about separation of students there are many reasons why they should separate and I will discuss those in this letter.

First reason I could think of for separation of gender. Would be sexual harassment\assault if you separate gender these would be slightly reduced. As a student I can understand if parents were to hear there child is being sexually harassed but to embarrassed or scared to tell anyone then this would be a problem solver for that situation. Parents are becoming to over protective over there children. This from my belief is what is causing the next pro to separation of genders.

Teen pregnancies are on a rise I would think parents would frown upon school for this reason. With the technology today there are plenty ways student would find to get around the fact boy and girls can’t see each other at school. There is IM Myspace, Facebook and plenty of other ways to see each other.

If you separate genders you would be causing students to rebel. It would cost more to separate the students. It would take double the teachers and a whole other school that would have to happen. Students would have less experience in dating witch means they may not no what kind of spouce they want in the future. It is against student rights to separate genders.

Kevin
First of all I think that music should be aloud in school. because for me I can zone out all of the other distracting stuff that is going on in the class around me. Focus on doing my work while I listen to music.

I also think that music can also be more of a distraction for some people and they will not be able to pay attention to there work as good as if they did not listen to music.

But I also do under stand where teachers are coming from. How they feel like all music will do is just cause problems in class because some ones music might get stolen. Or the teacher might just not want the music in the class for other reasons.

In conclusion I think that music should be aloud in school and in class as long as it is not causing problems for the person that is listening to it.

By angelo
Boys fight boys and girls fight girls. How do you think this will change if we segregate the schools to all girl and all boy schools? I am against putting girls and boys in different schools because they will break rules, they might end up not even going to school, and because of segregation.

First, I will be talking about how kids won’t even go to school. If kids don’t like the situation of school, then they will rebel and won’t go. Eventually a lot of kids will drop out, and they won’t graduate. If that happens, then the unemployment and homeless rate will go up. Kids will get F’s and eventually get kicked out of school. It will just be a waste of time and money to enroll these kids in school.

Second, I will be talking about how it will break the rules not just by legal but also religious rules. The suspension and expulsion rate will go up because after awhile they will just drop the kid’s names. Kids are smart these days, just like they were back in the day. They will end up finding a way to see the opposite sex while they are in school. They might even start liking the same sex, which would just cause most parents to rebel and take their kids out of school.

The last thing I will be talking about is segregation. Since the Civil Rights Movement in the 50’s segregation is against the law. Schools will get sued for having public schools separated by gender. It will cause fights. Like I said in the beginning boys fight boys and girls fight girls. Fighting is considered a crime and you can get changes against you and eventually end up having community service or even jail time. Segregating schools is unjust, kid’s hormones will be flying all over and a lot of students wont even try to control it.

So, finally as I come to the closing of my paper just remember that fighting is a crime and girls get sick of other girls and boys will end up fighting other boys. Think of the future of our youth, our economy will fail. I think having all girls and boy schools are bad because of segregation, rules will get broken, and they wont even go to school.

Dani
We should have longer school for the reasons of we would learn more, we would get more done with school faster, and we could get better paying jobs

First of all we would learn more because we would learn more because we would be in school longer. We would have more time, so we could receive more information.

Second, we would get done with schooling faster and be out helping society

Last of all we would get paide better jobs and get paide more since we would be smarter. If we where paid more then it would get the economy going well again. For these reasons and more is why we should have school longer


P.s.
I don’t really want school longer. I just need credit.

Colton
I feel that we should be able to have music in the classrooms because of all the things that go on in the classroom.

When students have music they keep their focus on what they want to do and they keep their concentration on their schoolwork. It can also be used to keep out all of the background noises. Me personally listen to music while doing everything and if I’m not than I’m not very focused and I get distracted by all the other noises around me. Like when someone is talking to someone you start listening to that you start doing what you shouldn’t be doing and you get in trouble. For some people they cant listen to music and work at the same time so I think we should be able to have music but at the same time make to where you can still hear the teacher.

It can also keep you from distracting others when you done and there not. Most of the time when you get done you start to get bored and you want to talk to someone and if you listening to music you don’t need to talk to anybody. It can also keep you from getting in trouble because all your doing is listening to music but for most people they cant even stay on task when their done, that’s why I listen to music on the internet so if I get bored with music I can do anything else I want to do as long as its appropriate.

It can calm you down when your all stressed out on an assignment, so you don’t want to yell at anyone or the teacher so it could be another way to keep you out of trouble.
It would keep you in a relaxed mood so you don’t want to yell or throw anything like your assignment at the teacher, that might get you suspended or in some kind of trouble.

So because music helps us concintrate keeps us focused and helps us not distract other people when were done, we should be able to have music in the classroom.
And I think that it will take away a lot of problems in school.

Ben