Friday, April 3, 2009

Narrative: Body Paragraphs

Two hours later I went and pick up my siblings to take them to my friends house, but first I had to get the mail from my old house
So my siblings and I arrived at the apartment complex we use to live at and started toward the mailbox when the magna police department pulled up and blocked me into the complex, at the time my family was on the run from DCFS.

They pulled next to the car I was driving, and was looked in
And saw my siblings inside and ask them to get out, so my three yr. old little brother Braxton got out first, then my four yr. Old brother Tony, then my little five yr. Old Sister Kirsten. They put my brothers in the back of the cop car then they told my little sister to get in the front of the cop car, but she seen me, and tried to run to me but the cop threw her on the ground. She was crying and her knees were scraped and bloody.
That made me very mad, so when the cop was picking my little sister up I grabbed a fist sized rock and hit the officer in the back of the head. A couple seconds later four other officers jumped on top of me, then put me in handcuffs and took me to DT. They told me I was getting charged with assault on a police officer with a deadly weapon.

Court didn’t go as I wished, The judge told me that I was going to long tem for five months then have another review to see if I could be placed in the foster home my sibling were in.
Five moths pass slowly as a snail; I went to the review and was Able to go to the same foster home as my siblings.

Three short months, that all I was in foster care, the foster parent’s ask if we would like to be adopted and my siblings and I
Agreed. To see the joy in my mother and father’s eyes were like being kissed by an angel! Breath taking as if you found something you’ve always searched for, then one day it’s right there and you couldn’t be any happier.

MARCH 17, 2007.the day I was waiting for, the big day,
The day I get adopted, the day of all days.
Now my siblings and I are happy and loved more then ever
Thinking that what started as a bad thing, ended up as the best thing.
By: Kirk

2 comments:

Grant said...

Wow dude thats crazy. Assulting an officer might of not been a good idea. But i understand why you did it.

Anonymous said...

I liked the writing a lot. I think you could have thrown some more detail in it though, but you still did a good job. keep it up!

Nick P (1)