Friday, October 3, 2008

Adult on the Island

I think that if there was an adult on the island the boy would act a lot different cuz the adult would put all of the kids in check and I think will change cuz jack does not want to go home he wants to stay stranded and hunt. And he wants to be a wild child and kill every thing he can. He also wants to be a leader cuz he is one of the older kids.

Angelo

20 comments:

Anonymous said...

i think you are right that the adults would put them in check and i like how you put that jack dosent want to go home

-joshua

Anonymous said...

angelo i think watchu wrote is write kuz kids do act different around adults so your journal is a good one



-jigga

Anonymous said...

I agree the adults would take all of it over i think they would mess it up though

Anonymous said...

i think they would put them in checc too

-robbie

Anonymous said...

adults aren't here to just put us in"check"
they also show affection



-shalee

Anonymous said...

your right if there was an adult there they wouldnt act like that

Anonymous said...

i totally agree with you when you say jack wants to stay on the island

-johnny

Anonymous said...

yeah they would help


-evan

Anonymous said...

yeah i think you're right a grown up would definitely put the kids in check. it would probably help a lot.

alex

Anonymous said...

I would want to stay. my favorite thing is hunting and i like to stay in the wild.

tayler

Anonymous said...

I think all kids act different when adults are around.
Karissa

Anonymous said...

ya i agree i think if an adult was there it would be a lot different to.



ashley

Anonymous said...

i agree with you angelo

TY

Anonymous said...

i think the same thing jack is a little dumb kid stay up
Happy Halloween!!!


~Ricky~

Anonymous said...

I think that to cause you always act diffrent when theres an adult around.

Anonymous said...

YA I AGREE WITH YOU.

Anonymous said...

I think your on to something there i think thats right

TY

Anonymous said...

Kids usually do act different around adults. It's a different enviroment so they act like they should. Some kids dont know how to act. But you did a good job on this...

Kelsee

Anonymous said...

cool wats that book call sounds boring, stay out of trouble.

Anonymous said...

your a good writer and your girl friend is cute good job man.



BRETT